This page has a really nice composure. And also a nice flow. I really like how you used the screentones as well. It doesn't look too white and yet still quite colourful. :)

But I think you need to improve on the English? ^^; Although it's understandable, but if you word it another way, it would put in a better atmosphere and flesh out the characters more.

It's still a great page, so keep it up~!! ^^

PS: Where did you learn such great HTML? D:

posted by Midorishina on 26 May 2008 06:41 am

lolz i can't express it well on this page! XD Sorry neh! *shot* @w@

I learned HTML since I was about 14... XD Self taught...

posted by cottonwings on 26 May 2008 06:44 am

Maybe you should get an editor? Someone who would check your spelling mistakes?

Self taught? Really? Oh man, I'm so behind D: Oh well, looks like I have to go...self-teach myself or beg my dad to buy a book lolz.

posted by Midorishina on 26 May 2008 06:51 am

Will find it.. XD

posted by cottonwings on 26 May 2008 07:13 am

Next page! Next Page!!!
KYAAAAAA~!!!!!!!
More interaction please~
No, no the screentones are not funny at all~ Looks real nice~

posted by 4verme (Guest) on 26 May 2008 08:35 am